I've found that leading people into a back and forth conversation where I can guide them through those same points, rather than try to get them all out at once, works better. Just go one at a time until you are sure they are on the same page.
I also try to eliminate parentheticals. Branching lines of thought are very difficult for most people.
> Branching lines of thought are very difficult for most people.
I haven't watched it, so this question might not be relevant - but how do you explain the popularity of shows like "Game of Thrones"?
From what I gather, it has several various plot lines woven over and around multiple episodes and seasons.
People also don't seem to have any problems deciphering the various "plot lines" within their own circles of family and friends (in my experience with people who seem to have waaaay too much drama in their lives).
Is there something about "video" that makes it easier to parse in this fashion than text? Does emotional attachment to characters in such dramas (or personal involvement) make it easier to understand intertwined plot lines?
Most people who watch GOT don't get all the plotlines. If you talk to regular showwatchers (not book), they regularly mistake Stannis for Tywin for Roose etc...They get enough of the gist to enjoy it.
I think most people enjoy GoT despite the story line. The content is otherwise quite gratuitous in the violence and sex departments, so it has a lot to offer to the most casual of observers without having a full grasp of the story line.
I also try to eliminate parentheticals. Branching lines of thought are very difficult for most people.