It would be interesting to know which bits you felt that was?
Also keep in mind I tried to edit their original post, as kinda suggested. I'm not sure I'd have written any the post quite in the way that they did - but I tried to work with what I had.
Pretty much every one of the attempts at editorial comedy.
People are only reading a post like that if they've been inconvenienced. Comedy is hard to pitch at an angry crowd, so unless you're really good at it, it's probably best not to try.
Also keep in mind I tried to edit their original post, as kinda suggested. I'm not sure I'd have written any the post quite in the way that they did - but I tried to work with what I had.