It has all the telltale signs: lots of em-dashes but also "punched up" paragraphs, a lot of them end with a zinger, e.g.
> Amazon folks are slightly more insulated, but not by much. The old Seattle deal—Amazon treats you poorly but pays you more—only masks the rot.
or
> Seattle has talent as good as anywhere. But in San Francisco, people still believe they can change the world—so sometimes they actually do.
Once or twice can be coincidence, but a full article of it reads a tiny bit like AI slop.
I'm not sure why you needed it for edits though, since you seem good at writing generally.
It has all the telltale signs: lots of em-dashes but also "punched up" paragraphs, a lot of them end with a zinger, e.g.
> Amazon folks are slightly more insulated, but not by much. The old Seattle deal—Amazon treats you poorly but pays you more—only masks the rot.
or
> Seattle has talent as good as anywhere. But in San Francisco, people still believe they can change the world—so sometimes they actually do.
Once or twice can be coincidence, but a full article of it reads a tiny bit like AI slop.